...
awaiting
...
no sounds
...
only heart beats
...
and breathing so deep
...
...
hopes are gone
hart's broken
life's empty
tears drying
***
WAKE UP!!
for you are still alive
and a human can not live without hopes
hope for the last hope
hope
for
a
miracle.
8 comments:
I relate to the deep and well expressed feeling in your poetry. This poem, as alwats, leaves me wondering about the story behind it.
I love the way you have paced this poem. A really nice post
Love a Pandora story! Well done!
Life really is the greatest miracle of all and you've put it so well.
Like the fight in this poem. How can we live without hope?
I find myself in your words. It's time to wake up! Yes, it is!
Always darkest before the dawn. A new day dawning as we 'wake up'. An inspiring poem...
Heartfelt here too! Thanks
I would like to ar the story behind this poem. Tooo!
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