Saturday, February 28, 2009

you took my hand and brought me here

I held your hand and followed you here


you let go my hand and left me here
...
and I'm lost

7 comments:

Fledgling Poet said...

I think everyone can relate to this predicament...great read. Thanks for sharing!

Beloved Dreamer said...

Short and to the point. I believe we are all lost at one time or another. Well done.

love-bd

floreta said...

so sad!

mspennylane said...

It really is so sad, and the shortness of it just keeps me thinking.
~mspennylane

Tumblewords: said...

Oh, it happens, it does. Darn. Sorry. Good work!

americanising desi said...

short and yet very appropriate :)

take a peek into mine at
http://eternitycallsus.blogspot.com/2009/02/lost-without-losing.html

linda may said...

This one tugs my heart strings La, it could follow on to so many places.