Friday, May 16, 2008

do yo know my dear?

you woke me up
from my apparent death
when everything has no more taste
and lost the sweetness
neither you brought it to me
nor you showed me where it is
you are nothing but a flame
who has brighten up my sight
and accompany my steps
groping in the dark
it's over
please go
thank you
for I have tasted the sweetness
after this I know
there is bitter I have to swallow
but I don't want to let it show


Tammie Lee said...

Your poem is so interesting. The beginning is so alluring, then it changes and goes another direction. i like it very much.

Rashmi said...

Nice one!!! :)
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carrie & troy keiser said...

Good poem.