Friday, September 5, 2008

*silent*

...
awaiting
...
no sounds
...
only heart beats
...
and breathing so deep
...
...
hopes are gone
hart's broken
life's empty
tears drying

***

WAKE UP!!
for you are still alive
and a human can not live without hopes

hope for the last hope
hope
for
a
miracle.

8 comments:

Granny Smith said...

I relate to the deep and well expressed feeling in your poetry. This poem, as alwats, leaves me wondering about the story behind it.

keithsramblings said...

I love the way you have paced this poem. A really nice post

Linda Jacobs said...

Love a Pandora story! Well done!

Paul said...

Life really is the greatest miracle of all and you've put it so well.

susan said...

Like the fight in this poem. How can we live without hope?

Jules said...

I find myself in your words. It's time to wake up! Yes, it is!

TD said...

Always darkest before the dawn. A new day dawning as we 'wake up'. An inspiring poem...

lelablonde said...

Heartfelt here too! Thanks
I would like to ar the story behind this poem. Tooo!